【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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- P3 i9 }4 X5 e1 F/ G* W$ g- H& M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) P; E' h8 c) y  N# D3 s% Y2 }4 c/ zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  q6 Y) [2 W+ o) {  T; pFrom the first moment we met,
) U; W* E3 [0 a1 oI already loved you with all my heart
$ E" d2 {5 T0 H) ]$ yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 B6 Q7 A' P# T+ r  t, U! rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% z/ c8 v9 U2 S: l: z. k' M" gI would probably know how you feel
  K' _: k3 y, u- s% U) V) ?0 PLove… just the word love
" H$ n# c& P& E+ }0 J( g3 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
! Y- [! F6 I  U5 B0 Y: XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 p9 r5 b6 H( _/ ?$ j. B2 K# X3 }& vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" {! O1 |1 a! f8 \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ B2 g7 @- s+ E+ w  CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ h/ y- p' W: K! ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  G2 o2 U; A0 R5 v* P4 I% BI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 Y6 `$ @! ]$ e* r5 h5 RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 h9 _2 d; O* u' jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  D0 \, M' E5 d2 D& L0 a/ ~% a; vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. i" p1 p! X( q' OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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# P5 O, \, d( W* b$ q  D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) j8 F5 L. p! [2 R6 `6 W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 {$ N: B* A5 C, O- b! w# X, |% G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  L+ m9 ~6 }( N. H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; Z+ X+ G' m. I. T/ H9 e/ E) Y<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 k: o9 T! |# J0 i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 M( G4 v5 d( o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ w3 @  j& i7 [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 R& K" C. [2 R9 W, @( m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 _4 J5 B/ B0 S0 Q2 X7 `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 P* t2 l" v, u2 U* i4 Y<P>但我不会</P>
; B! t, H1 O7 O3 R  E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' v" k# c1 _5 G5 I3 G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 @/ C. D6 r/ e" f1 F5 m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  o: S. N' G) d7 P4 l+ a6 ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ ^$ u6 x2 a0 i8 s. P* t! ~" k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 t8 |# [0 Z2 ]; C1 A5 {2 e, p9 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) ^# }5 a; X: E5 v5 o( R  g# ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! L+ P- y3 m. k7 c; @1 ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ Y4 D5 s& u1 n! r: Z: ?$ }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 T- M' E, C  F! P<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ T, G; [- Z, ?  g4 ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ A) |" T: ?! ]( p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 ]! [! r/ ]; C6 Z5 }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 ^1 l. @2 y# x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 G/ P' @9 q9 Z+ s) T! @" N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 v# Y. ^$ p% ~9 u$ H$ K. Z5 a" K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 g/ @0 a0 _# F; s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 K8 H- R- x) a3 r! n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ ^: F. o$ ~7 z$ Z" x. O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; `; Q) _1 F8 C+ A* ^<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 K+ p: Y7 k  ~( s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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) c! n; J% _! t$ l1 ~这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>