【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, W7 K% s& l% k  [* a- v0 O我另将歌词附在此。
6 E% q; {' g( A% _+ ~% g5 w/ \: h3 bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  u$ j1 c, e4 l( d. T) u; T- F) cFrom the first moment we met,
  M8 W' k2 `$ t! r9 d, D5 \I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, q" Z+ g& R8 r9 FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* P  \" {6 b1 c9 _% k( YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: ?) q1 |2 S# A  I, JI would probably know how you feel
% y$ k; T6 z' XLove… just the word love
6 f% _- M: n0 G; M0 }( e+ M+ F" oWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ n) f6 ]7 y$ F! v2 _% B) wI want to confess that I love you,
. ?% X/ d) c0 j9 U% LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ A% |0 r9 Q, z5 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ r4 B: ~+ P8 s) R6 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, G7 [* ?" [5 D7 _, ^# |2 }: t# E# |But I never did
" w+ R3 G- o& F$ B- F* s% c- LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 F, }$ `& T9 Y. cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) t% h6 X, j& h% A8 D9 UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& R  A8 c. m, c- [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 h/ y7 `. Z# A' O4 P2 `. t" V& s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 k4 f  r3 z2 c5 }5 }2 T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& \" V( w9 T4 M2 t7 e0 y; @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ E* i4 Y* g$ @/ U+ S; F% x# [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, I! ^5 i0 W) J$ j; b$ Q; d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ L; w% l8 _4 O- e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 i/ U  N/ ~$ V7 J: y' x4 t2 T$ y) [+ {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# o: G$ \9 q9 }" _<P>但我不会</P>
6 v% `! ~" P9 y1 h+ ^<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 V' C( j  v$ f6 ?# O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. H1 o* H0 S# h! ~4 Z" D2 R; }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, V1 }$ \+ c7 v' ?# F4 K2 D' \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 E. O: ~( r& |0 f  U* V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
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5 {& R7 l" h! C2 @& ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 j3 {) y% d) u% t: C& N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ L8 e1 _2 ~: T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 |* J/ p6 V. M  I3 D& @( l<P>But I never did </P>
% T/ p4 H+ ?0 G( D! p/ e; o1 v<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 {1 H4 ^/ Y0 K8 w) n+ |2 w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 p8 k8 A" K% W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 F% P/ I2 J! e. S$ x9 [$ k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 U7 R; z) @1 Z+ u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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9 }9 p* J# K' y+ B- F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 f# T1 e9 F* N$ E/ k, ?  l4 K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>