【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( V( S; P4 Y, m4 Q$ I5 Q; j我另将歌词附在此。
; E2 D( r% b% F" w3 wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( R1 @  u& S, |: ~2 H9 }, o2 i- v) tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 a& m6 i1 t+ ^! T/ X& C3 dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! |+ M! _. e5 N: H" g( R$ s, P0 M. eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& m% Z) i, w% ]' ?0 PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; p( |5 v/ f# O* R# H9 QI want to confess that I love you,
3 F4 |9 j7 F$ M& R8 }* `6 pBut I never did
; Y% m, b1 M% @# T& J9 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  k; H# A2 v: d. A! h. G0 N; OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 ]- \3 l. C2 @: u* cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& B- E2 g2 W/ p. u/ mCan I entrust it to you?
* r) N6 `+ K3 T# @Entrust my love within your heart
3 I4 b0 H3 t* A5 H2 h2 P  H, VLove… just the word love
7 a8 x. H2 t5 x$ I" R  ^, LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 l  c& I. R% o/ L3 c8 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* d) E7 R( \; Y" o% @Can I entrust it to you?
! Q, @; C* U- C& dEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 I1 l( d% K+ D% d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, y7 W4 t0 x# B- J; P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; y& B- T/ L- B9 w! a# v1 Q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 _3 _, I, X$ H- P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 U" x) W; |+ q. {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 Y: i- L) M" v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% j& D! x9 }) b' h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 A1 v0 v; {2 `. g" G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- s7 z0 Y* r+ O# A$ D& D; `5 k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  v5 _* i0 k; a: @+ a( o  r' I& x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 x- R+ e5 I3 h* o3 A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  F5 c5 ?- m; g6 _& c. ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 {. K4 x( q& k& a  R7 V1 @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ b2 }' [/ L- h; O' w' i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 M' o6 x- p. y; B  M& `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' n, b4 A0 b6 ^8 d' M' K5 A# u<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: P! k2 f6 J' {( K8 [8 H. e, Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 p6 G! b* o; L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* N8 z, K% D  W3 h. p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( D2 b' [# C. q; U1 E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* H+ \  e6 Z- |2 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ w9 j2 y: l" ~) ~+ R, h<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; a; ~/ q4 z0 u: q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 e$ @( ?; d: x5 \6 l( T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 e7 u$ M, b; O7 m0 E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ U4 W% j+ t/ S3 X  _" o2 j" ~/ R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) U. `/ m% `, I% x1 P5 F* b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 h$ I* C! b/ z4 p' g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' }; c9 D1 w  |6 K0 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: R9 P# [; M( w$ q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 O/ d& I# H/ E7 {9 B  k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' c: J7 `4 p- p6 h* n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) i1 Y& S6 F5 @4 |# p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 k! w* Z  Q' g% n7 e- P# i这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) G$ `0 a- s$ u" n+ a+ g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 C) s0 R7 \6 P$ Y# Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>