【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
  G0 V. ~( {" oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' U) b; I3 v+ s( P7 c, KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# n3 S3 E9 o8 X4 |  AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ t) |9 [+ M* J; V" ~& YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* K+ X: M! Y. @: M. n6 [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ N+ x% o; R  g7 m/ Y3 v6 ]  vBut I never did
: g; z+ O: Z4 W+ x2 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; j1 z3 I: _/ d+ q4 w( iIf today isn’t too late,
! J% D* _# C, ?. {" Q/ U, [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 f+ b/ h+ A7 k" s2 a+ w; hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# }. h6 U) x5 V4 P3 nEntrust my love within your heart
( e9 m- R# l: V! i- r# t( i) v4 Z; jLove… just the word love
# u: T. u2 b" \" q' l- G3 g% yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ B+ D8 N* C& W  x8 B; ?But I never did
. n! h0 Q0 N! V: uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  z& F, A! `! [) |6 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ ^4 m# W$ U3 l8 }2 H- }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ F( S& X2 O' |$ E1 Q+ I2 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, D; q7 h0 P5 Q' b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. ~; {" H" }& E' j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" D0 |4 A. y( G, G, A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# c% m" t) ^0 ^- u; n% ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ l, r3 }! b* ~( G8 s) s  Q9 q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' l; [5 v" ?, E8 S<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 U- L. @% u. w/ ~8 x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 f8 r) l/ t+ M9 [! ^( B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 _* @, V4 m: O) ^. |0 Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 m3 T/ B6 K, \  i' x. S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& E- u# i# E- m  _. m7 I6 z; M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* ?/ O& S& p% P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 c" j2 u7 d9 K; ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 n+ N; c0 m3 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  `) h7 Z$ @2 b% W) b! ^/ ~5 F5 v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 A5 L. |6 Y# d; U3 @  F2 \: X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) x# t  A4 ^; b0 ~4 p  O2 d( }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Q' |/ G% m. Z0 z3 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, {# M6 i+ M4 g<P>但我不会 </P>
2 N0 @4 l6 C: B. }9 n; f/ E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 f! b9 |  h" Q" C, E( H" E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, k3 D; w$ ]) p: k$ d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 ^. o. p6 E! A0 u- i  H, B1 ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! z+ t$ Q8 ?, D3 h) o' `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  V* _# T7 }4 h9 Q/ v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  m7 S4 c- O2 K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 U5 q1 b+ K: g. z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>