【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 a8 t8 ]4 X; S9 n0 B) v. IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 B* ?5 g1 k% ?& _2 }We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 _/ O' I# P3 |/ u7 vLove… just the word love
( K8 _4 P3 K( F2 ]. z+ bWhy is it so difficult to express?
: c% C7 [( \% }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) s! Y8 U, i" r4 r7 t5 }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 `3 [3 Q- T3 yLove… just the word love
1 U: N% j0 `2 O1 G( f, O- V8 A' \( ^Why is it so difficult to express?
+ g9 K6 W7 ]$ w% W/ {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# M. I; _: K9 B4 I. b9 IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 P0 R. y4 h: }/ cIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) |; @1 s1 j& q2 T3 U# ]6 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- k9 S4 `8 p5 A% v& o$ O' \# xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& A# e" k" u* P0 k9 x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! a& D; s1 T- i( a% d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" l/ o8 v, j: {3 n' e% G- L* R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( f6 W" Y, S; J7 z3 K4 S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, a8 K! R% M, V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 x, b) k; A/ h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: D% [+ v% b2 a# U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! O) P) W* {+ l! n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# S. W, h) B2 Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: [. t# r0 n! ]* j% j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! ^; [$ ?7 s3 u, F  L. u8 i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  f* `( m* w" z7 |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 d3 _  M5 E: V8 @- Y1 a5 F+ x" L4 I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 d9 O5 d, ^1 @, Y) _/ \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* ~/ A2 D" w* L6 M" M: G9 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 _: k, ^0 Q( `, S! V6 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 J5 K& y% u& l# z3 k+ \+ y. h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. U* F8 h- H) `# a/ n  S1 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) ~- `& D& Z! i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ L' v3 x" }0 k  q" i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" B, v6 W! n7 |% ~2 `2 e" ^+ k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  n6 R2 Z6 _5 ]1 A0 R+ j3 [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ `% `7 M8 t/ ?, _: `6 b( V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( S* `: H1 G; D! O1 o- F3 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' F. _! o$ u: A7 K6 q7 z  D" Z  B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: C6 q) i8 Z+ `2 g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 l1 `/ f9 Q6 R# W. r& S7 u. m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! P3 L$ ?0 K8 Y2 b0 `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) t$ R& c: |) t% C<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* w/ R5 c2 i3 ~  C0 p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>