【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' e. U1 u! v5 o- kFrom the first moment we met,
+ v3 ^+ X4 @* y9 @1 Q, KI already loved you with all my heart
( T8 p+ q2 m' x. s2 v" lWe meet and talk everyday,
- d0 H7 ~( z, w! Y9 _: r, PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) n, c  f9 {+ `3 I/ sI would probably know how you feel
& ?! F. C) y8 z, m2 VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) @& O$ d1 ^! dBut I never did
9 W7 ~8 Y7 R7 {/ e; A4 s, `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ {* r0 i5 [% F% q: `7 Z; w1 A' P' nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ o. Q/ [2 ~# Q4 C  R( k# u! EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 g1 E. [9 Z+ O9 |2 _1 o0 @' FEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 i1 Y+ D- n5 Z' AWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 o( L2 k1 {: B3 t" ]* XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 M" ]5 N' X" G& v2 x  LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& C7 |1 `" U+ w( T1 MIf today isn’t too late,
2 c2 V% A! k0 B3 X- l  }6 ]3 JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ S8 }9 f; X: ~8 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. u! D3 T- n+ f+ Z  |- D, kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 g5 d' E4 \/ E6 X: q1 Z. s. WCan I entrust it to you?
+ l; }: ~7 ^8 q* z+ ]" UEntrust my love within your heart
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$ \; G; m- t1 h3 b' V9 d: H. z  A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( T9 r2 f' ]4 L7 h: [/ @! a/ @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: H. y. J  l1 W" [3 t( u1 o0 P" x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, e7 h- {) M6 W/ x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 G" l9 T4 P" h8 W! [2 S<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ A/ r1 Z( S2 o# c% L. i, ]! O<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 C7 o, D# _% Y! y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ l" p# `: H9 c  M3 j/ s<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 E1 v* l% N5 w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% G# P, @6 p+ [7 @3 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& ]5 \0 `$ y, G& D/ e<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 E. z5 ?+ \% j- m( {" c7 C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 t: _1 {- {9 x1 v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 ^7 T! M' [- Y9 O& A6 g. J: R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 P! I6 D. o, ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! \- C  e$ [* M& C. A& c* w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& n4 @2 P5 u2 u7 x& p% {7 }% ]* z2 a- K0 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& R! x+ q/ r# {5 g1 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ i% I* d1 X# w9 H) q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 w! [3 f3 M8 y& {, P1 ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( e' S6 f* T6 @# c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' m1 ~5 ?; M( e- q+ k, W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! L! `. u3 L, I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& T, a& e. M6 ?1 J' ~<P>但我不会 </P>
  T; c* N- F$ Q$ q9 f$ R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ n+ u2 A; R% g( _+ J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 u) W! ~8 }; L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 _: Q1 y2 P' d: Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  ?& u9 h# l$ t5 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 _6 X; O1 O$ n( f1 o& j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  _+ }  U& y$ P$ f$ A! q1 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% X3 @6 J) j: d' t( o" _2 U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; N, ?6 E  I$ `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" ]. Y2 @; F7 {5 a- y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>