【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 Y0 y, l% Y# @! H  l$ E, Z% LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! P  J( O9 t6 k" ?2 Q0 A& ?1 zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- Z! f  J! G8 o% BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; e  F; S4 H. @1 \% p9 q$ \Why is it so difficult to express?
6 v) n3 u: [* |, H- QI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 @% h& n  w4 Z3 fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% X& V% I- ^$ ]: y3 f4 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ E. f, q5 Q7 w9 P; ]* e: DLove… just the word love
2 R6 h/ {. H0 H  I  y* DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ y& c! {, J/ q' nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ t8 n3 i5 u- s  t1 l. QIf today isn’t too late,
9 B, v1 n. j0 G0 m; YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% G* q+ d0 \. M; _Can I entrust it to you?
& d2 C) J, s" ?. PEntrust my love within your heart
) Y0 k3 _7 t6 xCan I entrust it to you?
! X% L/ a: }2 ?8 v1 h0 E0 bEntrust my love within your heart

" D! p9 I% l: A$ g& v, g! ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& ]' h: S3 _$ ]* ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 m5 \% `9 Q' l" L; ^8 `; N* R; M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, G9 @; G: _+ [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 l6 S6 ?5 M. q8 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* K; W2 s. a. ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% m8 I( P* g* m  h<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) s. G+ J# Y! n5 K# d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 R% C& ?; ?7 s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  z( ]! T9 E+ g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 q9 |( Z# w0 r3 ]1 y% ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" F6 ~+ j+ S8 o1 o6 Z3 R% @2 H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 z( D  A& Z+ p2 `; g, n5 @- J) P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 p3 Z7 |+ v% L<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" q& Z4 O% w7 f3 ]. j4 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' V8 T% U! Y4 z4 U0 W2 G, @+ E. n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& e  f  o8 @  c+ w6 P( r" ^3 |" }# f6 \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 u1 |$ P+ `5 Q" }; s" ?( K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 A8 [% |3 h1 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( x! o! b: i+ q: P2 K5 }; h% b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 t. r5 h0 N6 h' k- i, s* x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, W* N! a4 k8 d+ O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ c) E' a3 x' B: D' F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# a% Z; K( `; o( ^6 L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) O4 x: \2 c$ w<P>But I never did </P>
6 E3 I9 o- N) f+ N+ q3 R<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) r+ L+ J( O4 H% z7 X$ |  ?! |+ p5 }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 w/ M5 o) b  R& |# e, P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- ~. C. E) m6 t" R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! t5 Y( i( F5 x$ M: `" Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- {5 P) n6 L. _, c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& j! J& I5 D; i7 X3 S+ R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 w9 j! z9 m: q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 D5 D  }1 O" X) D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, F* u2 p) L; ~) g: _/ ~2 |! [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- b3 N7 y- v9 Y2 h8 v
9 H" ?# i  ]' E. r1 U 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; f; B$ O" N# j+ s2 c- ^5 f
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 t4 x2 ~* q9 {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 d. a0 j" `8 m- X5 ]5 ?/ s3 l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>