【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: s- K) g! R* ?! gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 r: P" N: o5 b& m1 N3 UFrom the first moment we met,
' B. n' X$ n8 ?9 oI already loved you with all my heart
+ s. N4 y2 j4 h/ R, d$ AWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 U" j  z0 O' qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, g5 R8 ]0 X) y8 ^0 Y! [0 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 m* N0 S! r+ C' t! jBut I never did
' k6 R: v8 G. H  F: V1 _9 C' ?9 `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  T" L" |) B  p+ ]4 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. v8 V0 c- G! ?( [' t# [Why is it so difficult to express?
1 N6 \! W" m( \- K5 MI want to confess that I love you,
& y$ v7 |! D+ W  r0 {5 pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" x6 Q$ S9 u, u' E. x9 `' `3 tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: T4 x. E& ^2 _7 ^& a* q9 |- XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 t# \2 {* c$ r/ Q+ cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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9 k" W5 K3 d" f# Z, s& r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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2 u" M# Z/ X- k: e4 {<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, p+ Z! G/ m. `5 h' Z8 F5 b3 z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  N2 @$ k9 {4 I  X% O6 x' z) `3 Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 l4 K% Y7 U8 N2 l# v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: o: Z: N+ I4 r( I. q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" w* x) v6 W2 g9 a. i$ ~1 ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, s! h- Q% I' J6 c: N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 X. Q. o4 j# C! a. y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 B  U  E/ i* F, i# M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: E$ v0 N1 R# k7 z4 A+ x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 v% ], D1 t$ j( }& R5 M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! D1 F# A: L; k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
; Z% x! X: l! H& y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. i9 N& e8 {. i- G) R- ?$ P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 a- W6 g+ |! Q. M) u) M& a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' r+ C, e. d' f" f6 c) g% f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. z5 ]: z* Y' x+ P: ]. c9 j# Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) E3 s- a0 ?8 O# @+ g% U- \' s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: v3 n% @4 V, R& [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 T! n* n& ^3 _4 C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; k9 N* Y% e( i! _0 f6 x8 m4 K1 _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 E! M6 n' S9 _* w$ }2 {% ^- |. ^0 v* q<P>但我不会 </P>
& j7 A3 ]7 M  m6 Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! F5 O4 K: u/ `7 d% c: f: ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" a5 O# e' J: |3 `3 _7 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 N7 n. ^. q- h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  O9 G7 y- M! Z6 M* r' |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" [; d5 O+ [+ S9 B% i6 c1 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. [2 W& g+ f) W; e7 q# j( C$ R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 v9 Q/ z4 n" A, L: Q* K+ e; e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. y; Z' e5 x; T& x: q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>