【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 A0 [5 g& p/ R( \The moonlight is shining brightly,
! P& l0 |9 G% k7 C) kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 r; @! [5 W, N5 P" P$ }, y! B, YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. S. O; u5 j. mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 {& T8 _$ M2 j9 R/ b! B- ]The sky is happy down to its soul
4 o% m  T1 [$ ?With the moon kissing it every night
9 O4 @+ a/ s" jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 |1 Y- o' G; M5 z. |Every other word you utter is love
' d" a0 }4 X* f( vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* q3 l; T/ F$ [/ p: MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 C+ l& |, K; [" J3 Z+ U0 o* J: FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 J5 y, F& y' B8 I( l. u: m0 }$ `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# M$ w1 l% w7 A/ r. [9 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 @4 `6 U: z9 }  J) B9 N% Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 t5 k8 H* C. D( @- _2 Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  Y$ D  r/ U/ F1 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' ]; w9 P4 j* [! c5 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 c2 _! \5 V1 I2 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ M8 r6 ?% L2 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. c) r4 l# S5 J5 B4 d2 s+ n% q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 R9 {" i  E6 G* \2 k# Q% X+ i5 X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' M% T: k. T8 c/ Y% ~2 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 F  i% V4 k; J8 m/ j6 J( `  O2 _2 P& R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  s. Z2 K. [" P+ W" K& V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; H0 p- P* \% w" u+ H9 ]5 T+ f8 Y- |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ Y6 q' t, H# J# G: o) d! b/ L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' W2 k0 l* ~$ D( I2 d5 Z2 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ @8 k( D6 }" E: c" P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  O+ F( t- z1 P: f- T) C8 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' C- ]; G& c% ~# V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 e/ D' O( `" j, i! _$ g. b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 v, j1 Q. C# q, M* v( E3 W7 J2 r  A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' [* v9 I* ?1 {- z6 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ g, i" D: w4 T& z8 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 ?4 p; e; A/ y( |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) K7 a# G* t6 ?5 a$ C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: D9 R8 k# c5 J6 A4 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  g- X& C  R$ Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 D8 C. `: Y# }" k8 K6 H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- b) a" R+ q$ m7 c& ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 O3 V. R! p  P1 N! o, d, z6 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- E9 y% Y( E( b. {, N. f/ b" ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 k5 m9 ]; k1 @" B我请你剖开它

) Y4 v6 @" S6 \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>