【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ G! j, j2 V; n+ D: _The moonlight is shining brightly,
, D/ G3 \6 U' UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, W/ U9 n7 @6 O% u: cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 M  M8 q' G8 l- ~( KWith the moon kissing it every night
( t0 A# Z9 D, z  n/ i4 FSeeing the sky content with its love
- Q' T  T% v& \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- d& I! P) X8 j# B  q0 T3 {+ IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 w8 ^+ Z+ c4 z$ T) r8 W- LI really want to know just how much you love me
3 \3 u% b' q' A. E( \I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 A/ _+ m: Q( i2 U- _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 D/ H( }5 c, b9 u$ z! uI’m still filled with fear
- g8 j- f4 y; N" c) w. G/ a5 _2 M# NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 d7 M% z2 S0 m* d* tWith such a tongue as yours,
' |4 S) T# F2 S/ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) P1 a$ N6 F+ f! ?% ?9 T* A$ XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 [! _1 w. G  e6 b9 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) e5 x2 z0 I. O+ I# m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. X! V- Q$ ~3 l# n/ O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& l. ]; Q/ B9 c/ k! I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 |1 [1 J- f4 R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- t% Y: [7 F/ B+ @7 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 }" {/ \6 _' z- _! s5 i) D% w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! [" m# T0 ~3 q6 w/ d4 }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. u; [. Z3 @  o$ M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( g* V- I& U. H# e: @* E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' k1 I  U& H# J( G" m# ^; q$ B& p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, R/ ?! d" ?$ k$ L7 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ K, [. U4 k7 C0 e  W6 W  Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# e5 `7 W$ G( v& \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' {4 a) [4 e8 S7 e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 u- g! z  k* A6 O6 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; H' X8 V# C! P' B* o5 d. W* A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: k+ o& e9 w. v# W0 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ~* @4 c' |9 T: F, w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ [7 c# ^+ I3 S' R  ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# i; z+ V9 x. F+ M* _6 Y7 i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 g8 Y: W: j. N* K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  [/ X# _2 O! Q: |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' X3 Y9 \* W# F8 X" B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; g0 X0 H. a+ E8 }7 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; M! r' q  j) K4 d" `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. O. u3 f: R1 O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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