【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 O: t: d: b- P' [& Q! T歌词我附在后面。
6 T, A* c* ~/ }3 z+ S  H( M1 d% MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  z* n9 l( F, LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( h, ^3 f% A5 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 w& c" C1 M2 r  y; gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 L7 ]7 k  ]8 p1 I, p4 j. S  CThe sky is happy down to its soul
: `3 H0 |- w. c: U0 z0 cWith the moon kissing it every night
) Q: m; P- B. C( n* JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 k% A7 |' d# Z" A, HYou needn’t fear anything
2 a1 C! M& p) k  _  `* d. vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& [3 t  `2 O0 t: ~+ s4 T. }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( k8 m# ]5 v6 `. `) }; x5 CNothing can compare to my love
, u  J0 W9 H) ?6 R+ GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 y) a( r4 D% M( r. t9 g3 ~( vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' Q2 O2 Q# r8 E5 W) d, }0 VI want so much to see inside your heart
; |) O9 u( P  P9 QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 u4 b8 f( V  g' p+ w! Q$ aI regret not dying
) D7 {/ o9 A  Q1 [' UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, q" w, B; {  N" F) M! J: T3 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 e9 l( t4 C, F. s3 }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 r. z# {$ o1 Q# a3 Z2 N" B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# k& j$ ?6 m! q: z7 s. n2 ?: w3 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 x' J) B* f) C( p/ q# a8 r0 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 m1 |$ U/ z: z9 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( s- T- M, r  h# G6 h2 [7 N$ F<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( R9 z7 S$ F0 q. S3 R4 Q! Q+ E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 a. h7 b5 y5 `1 u4 c) k  j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ b3 J$ W* J8 o. O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 H2 y' \4 A+ v6 P8 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* `/ X  ?; z% ^: w& b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 w; V. o/ Q, D; ?* ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ ?6 ^" S0 v8 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! [4 ?/ K& X, v7 t  N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. l5 A. x* b, S3 Q; `/ O; j+ j<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ R: i; R' J1 M: p. B( G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 i( @5 B! \" R" D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, Y; X# B7 }8 J( `4 Z" v" |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) e. q% k" _$ Q" x0 Y/ w1 c2 r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ ]/ J* m! a" O* Q+ J! x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. ^! c) x( u) T/ K1 N  }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" w) @/ V& N$ \$ @3 K; R7 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, D) Q8 i& m0 f1 G4 i2 g2 x, j1 {, ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  r' c" u7 }* }, L& V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 h# }9 I+ F8 A) w3 O+ u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( r8 l; a( w1 J9 d0 e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* R, _  |. J8 E% W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ ^9 C: x6 n0 ]; p我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 H) o/ c, A( L# P) D) s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>