【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ ?1 V1 b: }/ R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ D! m& u4 U" `5 R  N, w+ qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ {2 F- E7 A1 L- B3 \) L/ pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( s% s7 F; p$ o& d1 ^* aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" ~; S" h8 n$ A4 jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! m+ ^5 X5 T. d& P8 H9 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' u$ F! c2 U4 h! \2 }* s7 r- S: OEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( X, k, F* V4 F0 y5 M. z2 YNothing can compare to my love
" d* e, C- [* g( SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 o1 z4 a! n: ?9 S( j% E) K* {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% @) @" y, E: L0 E4 x6 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, {% X* S. j9 ^3 Z1 GWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( c4 z3 W; _( e* d+ yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 l# t" G! Q  `/ F3 _, o9 Y  U. U& k/ ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% @4 }- g; ~" f! }: p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% F9 l1 i) ^; n  R2 s8 O% Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 n4 a3 J% y/ ]7 y* Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- Y1 p5 \8 c& d: e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 t7 u! C9 F) W/ V( ~  \8 v$ o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 f/ E% f0 ~( K; `4 a: n' D2 k; M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 p2 N. `# X% E- E4 T( |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) N/ ]8 C4 J% N: u% j6 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 Q9 p& g/ G4 v1 N) F& Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  R) J' `* t% m: y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 M0 S  a% g  \& ?8 T  H3 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 E9 f" s* c8 [8 h) g<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ D+ I% Y  i) ~& i1 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( V/ D# L, N; z; Z$ [- h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- z8 @/ o6 t, y2 m+ g6 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ]  f6 F4 L0 \: ~# M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 s4 l0 z0 ?* Y+ A2 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Q( _& k+ n- b3 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) `! s+ ~! |- `( D2 o2 o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 w4 J! v& @" `' h5 a& D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 x8 t, W2 i+ }+ ^4 A' {1 d# Q8 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 d. S- K" \% K, ]5 O, _6 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 d! z; A' u0 M, P$ t" q3 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 y" K; Y+ o# m' |1 ?7 e$ k0 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# W. W% ~0 }0 w8 V( a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ A7 N: S6 @- X" E1 V. z6 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 ^3 j3 d4 K, Z; k& p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. j! j. r: Y+ J5 r, V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 }6 c6 r$ u- `8 b! `( F+ w. ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! e- L% e. j/ Y  ]- v8 f6 j) T6 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>