【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  B2 i' a2 W4 L: V9 H3 m3 K! G歌词我附在后面。
/ F6 y) N2 e6 G4 B; z$ H! wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. f) g. B5 i0 k8 ^. UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! J' {; b. u- ~0 n! o. }With the moon kissing it every night
# Q8 `. `4 n# M) ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ D: Y5 t0 P# ~Every other word you utter is love
) |# e3 ~  m1 Z) V, @I really want to know just how much you love me
" ?* E- G+ G/ r1 S# k& DI love you I love you with all my heart
; S7 Z% ~+ Q# d% |# |- ANothing can compare to my love
( r$ h' Q# w+ o' H: qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 U% b# X) u, ]. I2 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& m+ |( \9 |" O& f1 k$ z* s$ Q# wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: a4 Z* o! Z( e- W  {/ YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; u3 q' M; [$ \+ q/ q9 d' jI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 K! f5 f& K6 }, J1 rWith such a tongue as yours,
, X4 p9 B' z% {; WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! {$ k& e! G7 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- j" E0 r; {' y. A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 x8 S/ i5 G% ^: y+ M: ?<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* X4 ]; E# j; v( D3 P' [" i8 p, Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 ~* P$ C& E% S) _9 e2 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 N% V" l$ a! _! c: M; d& k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 w& s% n4 I  q  ]  m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ v$ ]& S9 m7 w: g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 S; b, g1 ]3 C* E" J" [. l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 r+ h* y* C; S4 ^/ G/ q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- u, i" g+ c+ P9 N2 K6 |) C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 J& Z8 n! Y# N# I! F% @$ t3 m2 l, G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! n  U  x( O- H- t, w2 }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 Q$ W1 v* m" W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 h. `4 S  Z( q  g( K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 L) e0 {7 }$ q' i5 D; O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 c; o5 t2 e) Y+ a; a/ m  C9 o+ g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, Y! c9 q8 Z& j. X* p" _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 r0 ]! f; B' Y) g<P>I regret not dying</P>
% z' n# K+ i% \2 C  W$ [( G2 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! T" h; R7 N+ E8 F- d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" b  R$ M5 r# \. \  j, W- ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: t. A6 n) \3 {3 D' L1 A" L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, n! f* C: l9 T2 w; m8 `5 U* O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 \: w6 H% ]8 o8 c2 L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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+ f- |6 c2 K# ~5 G( H3 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>