【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
5 Q/ i% c; u% i: H* v) DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( Q9 X; B1 x& ~1 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. f% v$ E2 U+ W- ]( n. y- E& NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* y) P" z1 r2 M5 E. mThe sky is happy down to its soul
- A& ~- a9 b7 Q- |5 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 }* B0 ^0 S' o( q0 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) f0 e; a" d9 OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  _! l& w1 v4 X' d" xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% S1 H( F- J; q) ], yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 b7 M' O  N% ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! ?- f, [- k- B  ?; m4 C8 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) l. l. M5 ^% N/ h/ t( _2 b2 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: G3 X8 }! d# h% t; @4 u8 \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% N& a; o' e* }. V, q% n+ Z3 d0 F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ h' q- P$ ?% k& D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 w- \: O' y6 |. W# m% t, ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% m  U: R/ c  |% d8 U& A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 o% E  t" S$ H1 ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ C. Q$ l# l1 @" g$ K- e$ v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
, w$ B0 s$ [  r# P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ p& l& ]; G/ U$ q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; b; T4 P) B' k9 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% O3 y1 G7 ~2 T) g4 r+ b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: Y) m, }' V8 ~, R3 b% z+ U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! y# b  `4 R5 D# f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 c; J; ~4 f0 S: e$ D% B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 _) W/ t) `& k: N- m; Z, B6 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: X+ N# a# |) v) ?% b1 R) A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 X" y& {, {/ m* B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ a% ~2 A* i. p( {: D4 H. S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 X; v. n5 C) k/ }' s$ v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 U6 n% {  G- p. X# E$ ]( z0 I2 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 n3 }% r: c! \; p& @  h0 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 O+ r- N. B: p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( C8 E0 C% ^+ t0 \# Y1 R- O# W8 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 |% \7 b. Y' }% U+ _) |' @# x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& b) \' I3 I4 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: f' g! Y! e8 j% ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 Y3 p2 H! Y$ l# |: ?* D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; [" {0 ]4 G" M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 J. l4 _+ j3 K  ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 l) H4 j+ R, t2 q4 I" J# V  d( Z9 D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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+ I7 C' x8 E+ K$ k1 i+ A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. f. B5 L9 D! c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>