【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ [0 f) l. X. R2 k5 E, v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ u8 R; A/ E7 GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 b7 r5 B% S. e7 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  T1 N1 f$ x$ ~6 V$ uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 N! P8 m" f* i& W) [% u- V: EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" o& \' z+ W: yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" O8 N: M% H! d5 k% a( sI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 m, [) V2 k" TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( v: t' g9 S6 B! V  p% Q1 f  m+ mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. e  m: b7 Y! e! z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  d( X: {) y2 V  m7 h- a. X5 J! r# C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 F! V' Z8 w8 e" z6 x0 o5 P, H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 y+ @4 K( h2 Y2 w- N+ h1 j% y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# v: x3 e1 Q. Q4 D& ^5 M0 n+ o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; n0 r- K4 e# j' e- O<P>你无需担心</P>
; k7 P/ w* I% s8 j4 w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, ^6 y0 i$ c) L9 V: n& b1 I& T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. }; V0 ^( s8 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. k; g3 K+ @( H8 t  n% |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: ]( Y0 `( o# R4 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" Z0 v+ u$ r; Z. {8 J# L) d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ W8 `# Q# c0 K6 l  e) N9 ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ E' g! H# k1 n" a  H3 g* _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" d* q/ \3 y/ ]) X. o  O6 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 Z. L% H3 A/ |* a: Q$ U0 F' C8 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 d2 U( |4 a+ Z5 `& W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 G( W8 Y2 h, F. @2 y% m! q+ O  S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ n0 {$ ~  f( W, Z! y<P>I regret not dying</P>
; h4 ]& A4 F+ D# W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" O  |( W% J- \+ i  k4 A& Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( V0 Q4 q; P4 z6 }$ n7 u7 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: \" |; U8 [; h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; r7 Z: Q+ N% H$ ]8 L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( ?5 t+ M- l( {6 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; y$ C' M, C' I% P$ _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>