【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 ?6 T9 }; S! C# P! qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 c, G( L4 \( M& e. C/ p5 w& v% NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 p& z( W! E7 VWith the moon kissing it every night
  I2 z0 F! k% h5 f3 J7 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ F4 m6 k0 @( d& R( x8 W# d6 g% N8 \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 e! i3 C3 \: K3 u: kI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% E2 J  V9 R2 o7 K' mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" ?8 h  F5 B( G/ n; x* [2 FI want so much to see inside your heart
) r2 S  T4 P+ zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' ]4 g6 T7 F" G. ?& {. PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: q' ~! l% ~* X& p& Z4 z- OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) f3 y: }: u0 u" t" d* U$ d2 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- p& [# _, B! \* @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- T& |0 C) U/ c1 O- s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 B, s/ k+ A' f. t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ j* u* T" g( f) H" L8 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% y. t# W# s8 F9 ?. m1 m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( Q8 K& B9 T6 X4 S. M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; D4 w6 ~5 H( S8 ]: R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; j% K! t0 U- W7 `8 i. O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 R0 d; a6 k' {$ v6 |5 a8 k# V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% ]7 ^- s% ~3 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: j( T+ W( d: j3 N+ u: G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 E3 ]3 \1 y* x0 p, E4 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: Q" y$ p( a* y- Q& B6 k- j+ M. F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 c! S" J2 s4 y5 l$ ]( Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 f4 A* M  ?  o- c& A, n% F2 n1 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% `. _6 ]  g0 N" ^8 w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ S# a6 g1 g) Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 g" _4 w9 {2 T* {8 s( U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) h7 @. }5 K5 O+ d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: a2 r5 c/ d& d' o/ b2 p+ c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 F9 ~) v3 X0 z: P* ]" C- R7 R6 R5 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  v$ J/ ?9 @; X# O; @$ ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% H8 f) {7 E. f* c  A/ @% t' ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ z# M5 R! h7 \0 I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 }) o2 G4 V8 Y) A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) ^* m' }$ M$ \9 K0 J* g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ]# X* b; M/ I  u! j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' r7 y2 @0 f# T9 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 b: C6 P9 B- n# @/ ^  @+ F我请你剖开它

, g3 g2 A( s% v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>