【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 w. _, t; a2 M& g歌词我附在后面。
/ w* G$ J- q& d/ j( wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 l/ v9 T# _1 H0 M* c. ~' l& l: PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" g8 r; Y) a: y0 c$ U4 }4 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- I* l9 W, I" ^, }, w3 o, HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# E: C+ @# ]9 O$ a6 Y6 Y0 J4 vSeeing the sky content with its love
2 ]/ C1 c3 z# D3 ]7 F, ^8 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; V# l8 Y6 D5 A- ^+ oYou needn’t fear anything
0 T) L# Z1 j" a, t! N7 T/ sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 f9 \: v9 q' c/ m( i) S0 BEvery other word you utter is love
& C! i1 c' s8 J: _6 e! FI really want to know just how much you love me
. w% f$ m) A) b; M5 h1 c. Y! t" uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 T& L; ~' a9 ~8 d+ XI want so much to see inside your heart
0 r8 `! [" _; J/ }: eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 u) `& f. `3 \+ L+ ]4 H7 wWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' _2 K. j# ^0 U4 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; Q9 B6 m# M1 _, T" ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- g: Z! ?2 K2 @6 K- ~& V  v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 B& S9 U. T& |$ t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ n' D. R2 _: `0 \& n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' o1 Y1 {9 d& B5 v# ^$ B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 K* Z/ Y: L4 `<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 o( T1 B! h7 a$ Y4 ?; Z( R6 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# F# U& w7 C( x4 l- P! |2 C- c/ j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 @# f/ h8 Y$ X& X: g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* f1 T4 }" z; Q  B3 ^# V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: }. b- W4 e) M# F+ n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, t3 ?, r- o' q9 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 b8 [! T) y! d7 J* |5 {! E+ E  a! f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# G' S& l* O# x! o3 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! \+ H- h" a3 e% a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* R! B$ x* X) k' n; ~  s* L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 i+ R: M- H% {/ C* V0 e! ?4 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ e, y) d" z& g5 Y5 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" f5 j9 n( Z' L! v% {' V# `; D' g& @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: C) m# Q+ J: n7 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ b* o& @8 o* l& U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  {7 b# A  h; {2 V, ?6 P5 `0 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ o9 g0 P( T0 V9 O& W9 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  x+ R4 C$ h& V7 T2 I. h. \; y# r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 u7 a7 C- M; s8 }# `6 U. |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 _: b, P8 q' F. w; l- l# O# n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, Z, D% O8 W' f4 _我请你剖开它
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* e- M+ R  L" J2 l( P/ c7 F2 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ ~" q* `" g( q7 a# g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>