【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 d, z; G$ O7 r0 W" v4 z& D歌词我附在后面。
- x+ K1 ?3 s( k  kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# Q& V  U3 j. s; H' }( yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 P( Y8 ~; w8 H7 z  PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 f% X) p0 B5 Y/ {( R% ?4 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
; P0 C6 w# G' O$ l8 J+ {" P! U. JWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; S* B4 V+ a! ]7 l! Z& k5 U! vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ [6 i4 G7 F" RNothing can compare to my love
( e6 b4 h: g- p% A" lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* u+ x0 I* A8 T' |: x- M$ ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" B$ s+ a2 g  R' lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. q% Z2 H* p$ G4 l9 YWith such a tongue as yours,
' I* L2 r0 m" F9 @3 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ k4 L# x' M2 N3 R' s  m& X2 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 k: u' j( I3 `: ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: X2 {  Q& T+ e0 ]* L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 _& p/ B* S; B, b( r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( @& r1 E+ [8 c# K6 k) Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 N/ R& u9 z" O3 _0 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 u7 J! R0 U; a$ U3 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 U1 v2 D  G/ m8 {0 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" P" q- P  D( u6 E: Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- y/ f+ i3 U& ?7 f- W" P  V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- S# t: \7 \0 e' z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ v4 a# J* E# F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 b. j7 \5 k9 e3 I; Q1 I! O<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 q! |+ e4 o5 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  U, o5 k; H! Y4 `; W+ V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; I" D4 m3 m0 v, f  w0 h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 C. ^4 ^; x. `& H$ z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& N2 X8 C7 n* S! R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! g+ Q9 _" M$ E/ E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# W8 Z) B% G7 k  H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# L6 }, S* _. [8 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 R, K% C9 A; Y$ D$ w; ]. x8 s0 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% T% f; M; M$ l# S+ m1 @0 x; ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& i/ ?+ J9 s7 W0 p# T: n$ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 U: J) r; U" e7 [8 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 U6 o& d; h' @, ^2 g1 L& p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 R3 W& z6 r7 D# ~. ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! l- k& _) l8 `. R* \! p<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# i! M! R: {0 }; X/ a9 p3 Q( V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 [- R5 W5 k) g9 J7 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* N- C: d5 B8 [1 C- j2 o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% n  v0 L: H' z6 V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% d2 b9 ]) e* D6 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 K1 {6 K# K; L& S' J8 Z6 }) ~' P9 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 e% E' v3 x, \% P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 U0 W$ @+ @7 O. \6 S/ p我请你剖开它
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. \( R+ a3 K8 ]3 I5 [1 m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 r4 @  ]' I) q5 j% _6 q$ }3 z6 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>