【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# L- `& [9 [  z3 h1 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 S  F8 ~! A4 T& kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, T( @9 a3 Q, J0 ]. ^1 ^; l6 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& o1 u9 J; v7 C7 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) l6 j6 [/ m- l; O9 ~; b, M: cThe sky is happy down to its soul
# K  I: |8 \7 j. S8 g# d9 \9 CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 z3 n8 R" f. t4 e8 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' Q' B3 m$ {# h  n% ?6 d  Y7 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 t2 A1 O! R  r3 K3 ]1 x/ EI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 I  ?) N& w6 i$ [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 b8 q" a6 f0 U2 oI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: F: Q$ i7 ]6 v2 k3 R. ?- i* j+ LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 @4 {( _9 U' P8 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 S* o1 w5 v6 M- o6 I9 k8 x: HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  N5 s' x7 B! p0 c- y4 }0 [' D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. U- E5 k" ~& z7 u, v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* T, a5 c; E0 J3 I. X$ a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( d" ~& w5 t9 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; u2 z8 G/ s/ e3 K% R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* p4 I% x: T$ `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 u. q% \0 T9 h4 l0 D# w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  y  }9 K- {7 e/ ~<P>你无需担心</P>
4 [) J% r) ?& ?8 c% B- h! H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' s1 I7 L! x5 M4 n- H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 F4 J7 ]5 U5 k% M) I/ {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! b3 M2 r8 K/ i! ~& S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, Q3 _, p0 I& p0 w( [% h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: Z4 T( U' k; ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. F" t7 Q: h. ^2 r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ s) Q1 N4 c5 q/ C& C$ X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ A* C; i: f. e- D8 H' g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' \+ ~+ y6 w% R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ U6 @5 [" y5 O/ m3 P* i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; K4 @& n. U5 ?8 l- a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( E6 `7 W& B, e4 f0 D/ W' G+ z- I8 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- ^- ~! O8 k! I7 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 T1 R3 S; P3 \* a9 c* c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 _% u9 w6 t% ?* q3 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% [  z" O0 P& k; E<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 v$ O6 G. k! w4 D2 R. }+ v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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/ y7 |/ _$ [& C  N9 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& z# g+ F, X4 h3 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>