【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% w: I7 h' Y  P1 l# Y& L; E" J* k6 |  P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: I' m  s6 Q( i7 q( R$ ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ O( i* N1 Y2 }" B. W4 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ y/ ]" Y& ?4 rWith the moon kissing it every night
- Q0 n, r8 N9 t: j" [! _- x. J& VSeeing the sky content with its love
( M& [9 W* y. tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% D9 q2 y2 @% t2 gYou needn’t fear anything
% }9 D( d* o: K0 s8 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 t- D- g$ [- R! N* G  TI love you I love you with all my heart
! g: n% ^3 r2 g- y2 KNothing can compare to my love
# X2 |+ V) c$ h5 N- x5 h2 W0 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" C; [. H. X- M2 J5 B3 r9 d5 |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! m# }/ t# ]- H  lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' Z$ C& u9 r2 k* Z$ w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; A7 n2 a3 ~/ n: I4 a0 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 i! r; A" F6 b$ L3 _" H& w# u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& G& \  O( f. L0 u9 j# a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 B( y% o' y' E! |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  m6 I  g  c5 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 e1 f& f: r/ {  h# P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 s/ d. P+ ^, u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 T9 Y# n6 M6 Q4 K, X' F4 _- S<P>你无需担心</P>
' ]0 |' G/ s! }0 n& L! E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& D* D" ^2 c8 i+ x7 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: f. K+ l: g( ~7 |* A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 w: u% O7 ]! Q8 C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( ?7 b9 x: o; k1 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, A' x0 d  Q6 f4 _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ A6 d  W+ }8 n% N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% u4 p7 \" |# A& d7 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 ~$ J! @: u" C$ N. k/ P4 h0 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  ]' |0 g, Z' Y* [( l4 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, K( D! ~* v0 A# |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 k9 E0 g6 h8 \; [1 u) D2 Q" Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ O4 t+ ^0 X8 W5 j0 c/ t<P>I regret not dying</P>
( y) F* v! w+ e" |7 w: ]. e; A) j<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' y6 l) L* f3 E1 `' ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% H% U! A3 \/ c8 Q+ s+ O<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 W. M4 H! c* F4 R/ N4 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ F. B* z4 b) N  {+ J  X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 r, W1 z6 x' f" g- f我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>