【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 Y: T, Q/ ]( HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% q% V" T) ]3 t8 l% uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: ?$ w' g" Z' u2 v* \* ^With the moon kissing it every night
/ A8 u5 v7 b( p5 }  \# A& ZSeeing the sky content with its love
! E1 k5 W; W7 f; gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# e9 A- Y5 o. k8 l- yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" _- d: M5 ?9 R2 g4 AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' [  a' z! V9 T* z# X0 D. b  M; xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- t4 z1 Q9 L0 R  gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 [3 K2 y' \4 u4 @% b7 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 B; h; U' c: |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- I* v, ~! n8 N  [. b3 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 a% \" F6 z) C5 h# P+ [' q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- j" |& |7 l+ }8 A6 K. |6 k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 {) s9 K: S0 r" s; }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 B* {# E$ A; {) y( a! ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 j6 s5 c. G* x. @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ v! |+ L7 j9 _' a! `6 U8 h/ Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' o& J& m8 R' N9 R& Z& m5 _2 q2 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 d& R+ h0 |7 S9 ?2 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% Z+ I% u- l6 @# n% g: j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 @& ]& V' t' |7 X3 ]5 e/ T# @- Y( S<P>你无需担心</P>
( {$ O% u  X( ?- q! U5 y8 e2 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 c& z- Q& i: l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 J6 N& t0 ?* ^- K' `# O- [  _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* [3 A2 I3 j( u) w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. o) Z* e& V9 B$ X6 A) h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& I/ }7 e* ~0 ~8 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) }! B4 B* D  ~7 Q/ }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; u2 h; Z' m! v8 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. A1 U; A+ H" Z2 d: L* Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 O! ^. Z0 h1 h# x! U/ I6 t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ O& e+ E/ g1 D  c" \+ V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: k- n, q$ h: F6 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" l* G4 J4 z1 N9 d, V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! K0 M' ], H2 e& j8 \# ^1 Q2 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) M) j8 Z; g* {8 y- I<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& Z7 p8 t- S% _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 s* A/ z! h2 e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 C3 X" ^1 p/ V, I2 B- [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 J; ?/ S& r. T' B  O; F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: U9 Y; X9 X' X: g9 z5 M" v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) i- r6 \/ |: e  R2 m+ H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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3 R/ E4 {1 f/ {, I" x) x2 g& v, \ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- @7 j( n9 w! T6 `7 w; R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>