【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# d( R* _8 {0 y6 k歌词我附在后面。
( T3 Q" l( h$ i; kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 E$ A" F: W( _. X0 M6 ?7 ~3 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. a: D; S) r( x9 J; _2 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 Z' |% \0 B" }# p. j4 H) V$ eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# F# `7 O+ h+ a) F; RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 ^4 i5 i& f0 y. r! XEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) q& x4 P; |* e9 }I love you I love you with all my heart
9 S, y# C- ^! V5 j$ FNothing can compare to my love
+ w" X  L  O4 q1 s& wCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: a6 |0 D  X+ l# B2 o  L8 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 x4 f0 ]% |. v6 J' JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* }, Z! x7 M% Z: S- `$ R" r' t3 i" _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! \8 e' e& e7 [3 R* u3 N7 }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; l" n4 q4 A: e! K/ \& ~) ^6 B5 J! eWith such a tongue as yours,
; g7 C) h8 S3 Z$ S3 P5 dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 e& h. l" O1 a7 Y5 J9 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  b& ~5 G% y7 B" URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 D: J! B9 T3 i9 P; O, |: ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  y! B0 p9 t+ E$ Q; ~- H9 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, @' W  I! s8 y, ^/ L' c<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ @9 d: a  [+ X: l. A1 k" W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 U  d- u* B$ N# }5 q1 W0 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# k6 C: U+ ]. p2 ^+ L( T6 U1 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: i4 L5 Z4 b# k! W' e" e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 F! ^( L1 R" H% u0 S; y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- S5 q) F$ ~4 F0 l7 X  t+ D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  n  n4 {, U/ C8 }+ o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! t, j# n7 X+ `; q8 w  H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 U/ D% q& T4 K+ }5 b0 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) ?9 {: K6 k; `1 `4 z" j" L( }6 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; c! m" j8 \: p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 C) L+ i; h$ I: E0 y; W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" c2 Q6 p7 H5 L1 y8 |<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 X! r( q, C9 w1 H9 z6 H! w1 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 ]% M& a9 g. j& y2 M: W3 [) Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 c6 W' k& v% j! u1 P8 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; n: j! w1 k* T9 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  f, j( o1 }1 \7 F; `, o* Y5 N我请你剖开它
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+ H, v+ h5 `7 o" S; q, V- ?; @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>