【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& K" ^9 ^  }  N5 [* c0 U# [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 d& n% T4 O. w9 k% |/ _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  l1 B  A! \, Z; IEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 ?" h/ J# Q7 k3 tNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* ]( e2 S& U  V+ {; p' _, B4 e$ CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' B. ]& P. B3 M: t! I9 SI want so much to see inside your heart
( u; b% U9 j/ Y* k! b# o* O. LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, O, m' v% X" j/ ]) W# MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ R  \! o3 T: ^6 P' Z" i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 b2 D" i, O  ~, r$ O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  x4 I4 F4 `  u7 A& d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, k. q; W* I6 F* M1 c3 L9 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 @  g5 _7 M1 i" H3 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  q7 n; u0 X* B- ]. w& p( W8 r' _0 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) ^# p! A9 |: u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ K4 P: v6 T! T, I5 G0 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ A0 S& u) v0 C: X4 B7 I8 y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 O  N3 S% |. S  P+ d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ L6 h1 K" |5 ~  P# T! k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% W/ p4 z. h2 i! x# F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. Z5 M% X0 ?! p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" R4 L+ s, ~" I! B, F6 a# B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' {- U+ D' [$ J5 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! y6 M3 N( C# `% S$ e. E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! {+ y* W3 G4 P- l: w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( G7 N% c/ ~- y" G  v' Z6 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! ^2 l. z. V8 T" i) g! f& P8 d* C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" F4 A/ p4 Q: H6 w( _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# p% S) a  `& D: r) M* i( \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 B# V  N) G; `+ m3 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; v% g- W/ k5 o  t1 U6 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ }& s) {+ _6 X7 a5 ]; r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" @7 a/ y+ N" h( k% f& Z. G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" x. ]$ s3 S2 R6 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' D; m( |1 `! G% _2 {* c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& W( h& d  k4 F0 C' d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 j! ?3 h9 ~1 e3 @0 X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' u# S1 m1 ]0 V! h, S2 K* G8 m. c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' K$ c9 w6 W" f. R( Z) K( m$ b: p! ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>