【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 K/ [; L; Z+ }& k; b歌词我附在后面。
+ Q# ~( i- a$ X2 P1 X. s' ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
: ~2 B$ b( P& ]! ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ c& e- ^( b( n& L( v5 {1 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
" x0 r$ n" ]. H$ W0 UWith the moon kissing it every night
8 O% I" t! B; }' C+ P8 hSeeing the sky content with its love
6 X" v1 s# \# T3 xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 Y  W- |5 J) R6 ^) a4 X  @" ^$ yEvery other word you utter is love
* T" z, D( W+ B& G0 A- WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. h/ M8 b8 V) ?# r2 F, HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 f" y1 u+ ?2 A' sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% e0 V- \: ?6 \" gI’m still filled with fear
- l1 ^) V1 e% ^/ y, SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: Y# N; o" A6 D& D- F& R- ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: v, f& F/ i( \+ I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& C1 n% q  h) D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 D0 c  S- }# m( f5 l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  M. A; F2 ^: C/ v1 W& Q6 {  F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' _1 M/ Q4 i1 e* a0 i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 p6 L5 F! P$ ]3 {" X- q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# `% i$ i; H6 p$ Q7 K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 x+ y+ J  ]+ Q% U/ K" ^+ Y' g2 V& Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 O& x7 O  r/ |2 T1 o9 P$ b/ P0 F( t: u/ z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- E8 S1 d; X  I7 k" f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 H2 Q2 q4 i/ h% Z8 @3 F  K8 f; J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 N' Z- c! k6 @7 ~4 n9 `4 {. w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ @: G! n) d  h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ X3 @; }- X9 Y: ?0 A. Y1 h& b7 o2 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& I4 R1 n9 `# ]) f+ I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 t( v% M% z* C8 S- `3 f3 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: \8 l9 }, D! P2 \. L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, l( `* [2 z. U/ c- h5 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 F; A1 a  Y9 {2 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ |0 c  K  _2 M6 a% G& V6 t/ h3 T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, T7 u. ]: m) C9 x% g+ l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 E: R- \$ M4 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  z, q9 }, ?. ~- m* d" Y3 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; `: Y7 m. V, Y6 ^<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 Q" g) S3 `5 u1 z4 q- y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& d% }2 \5 t  ?/ N4 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 H. k$ H3 }. m9 Q+ h0 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 A8 ]6 ~& {: l<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% ~& ?, O; N' F' @- N: x, f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 y& J( a/ c' b6 b" O2 J% h; ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 R" x5 [0 }, }2 L. ^0 j% \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>