【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ T5 Z5 B8 ~; t3 U; U9 I歌词我附在后面。
( z# \5 t0 T' R) A; xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* E* C, w" D, c4 \0 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; t5 e9 M: x8 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 X- w9 A$ A9 T' OYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 j; |- M& a* @$ q: {, j" {Every other word you utter is love
, C! _4 Y( p  ]- a3 Q( ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 n2 U* M% r3 ?3 r2 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, B* t1 @6 S. e- c& p$ {. `I’m still filled with fear
/ t! I6 H1 v1 a- n5 X2 U) eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 I! S2 z/ R  m+ m+ U+ N5 N3 Z% OWith such a tongue as yours,
; G4 Z, Q" b/ e  d: LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: z5 m0 A" Q0 J9 }3 O1 q3 C* J1 gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; |1 a  [' e9 @6 f3 w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 }0 v% \3 ?# e; v2 f: A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ q" _( ~; q' H7 G6 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 J  Q8 O/ p/ e- X6 u- Z0 j7 B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. @4 ~5 [; H( T( _3 f7 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 |; w3 B% }: y  P; a5 ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 o  x% H# X1 M0 x1 S- i. F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 C: W- e; j- L' ?- Q" D' b5 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. O- [& M0 `+ J+ o7 w1 [1 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ J1 H4 z, Y: t" ]$ g2 g; j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- ]# M/ B  y9 N  d/ G) ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! s: q4 T) _5 |5 x8 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 n# f; q% Q& U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 u" r! y# p" M% Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" Q2 l  c! _2 D7 E4 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% C! f; p' L: b' m& i- l/ ~, z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 K+ l4 S( V8 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  I- n! f  v9 W/ u$ |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 Z  O2 |8 ^- H5 m; M) s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 h, |* Z5 z( S: Z4 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  @: W3 b7 q6 [4 V, s1 r% F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 ^% f3 _1 K! }+ Z3 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' y! }$ N8 a2 Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" L8 m0 @: [- ~! W' k* C+ f* @) `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 ]4 B( [7 a% A$ f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ j$ v% V* o6 e4 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) ^0 [, c! B. b; m! z: L  Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ U, [( _, X& n! ?3 U2 [- P; r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& p3 a$ `3 R" a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& s1 ]# ]: U7 @( e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 p$ V' ~! _! c9 K0 m% T8 g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  O$ s9 E7 O6 r" q; A" U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& j8 ?- ]4 \0 q% f% A- I; a" U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ e6 q! D2 z) B8 X% j: |! E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' c. l" S! ^, H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>