【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! {5 s# O0 w5 m; G* mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& Q1 H1 v' T- E! U0 N( qSeeing the sky content with its love
) ^0 n) ^' k, I0 ?0 ^3 ?" sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 c7 K6 D. q+ g; u2 d8 c# A: k( p" wI really want to know just how much you love me
( A4 s; B/ R- R6 s! ~% hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 x1 w) Y3 r0 W0 R4 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; A, x/ [  s/ OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 \9 U, q8 p9 @$ e1 z" s+ gI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& B& @9 U2 A7 ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. }" `( k4 u" v2 Z6 D- g( r- }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ P" g% o$ G2 W3 n( o" V  z6 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 s, A! X* \! M  M1 |8 ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 P# L' r/ c" C0 i7 `) ?2 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" L  p" S$ a8 v9 W  _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ H' }7 ~0 H8 J1 c. t9 w2 ?" G( B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 r9 a3 H7 F; n5 ^3 a+ |( i1 \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 x, x0 A4 b7 F' y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 j0 h& M% m4 N3 F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# {( r$ E4 c% r2 u6 S9 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ V2 f) W  Z# V4 m  W" @7 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ a1 `6 s) f% K9 R: g" _8 ?" v/ _9 X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ S$ C+ Q$ I' W3 G  `1 X# j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  U  Z2 k1 K0 `. |) Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 p1 ]  B2 V+ `$ M+ t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 z* H. [2 h1 a  I% w; I( Y9 M, ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ M4 X! d7 `. n/ {4 V9 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# d) c# Q2 Q, i4 J' {7 Q* {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* t& H1 S; E3 J% v3 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( o4 P, \3 t* T. A% c, B9 ]! U: y% E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 |' r6 J- ?; K# ~+ t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 o# Q9 f$ H; \, {9 V<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: }, S% F5 Q+ I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. ^) c+ t+ C5 P: \4 s3 S  ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 `# D# t; l) Q. _+ Z* T4 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ \8 Z" `4 e* A8 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>