【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
: \8 p. X6 w1 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 W9 D* h2 a2 l( o0 u! }) vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) U( i1 n9 E9 b& Q- Y3 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 @" a7 {. r4 [* t& G8 Y2 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 Q+ Q- _2 ]( _2 t; @With the moon kissing it every night
: h( A: W, g9 Z2 C" ^* USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( j4 c' J+ f7 G% ]0 `0 V% {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ f/ I, V+ Z) {1 x0 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! H$ _( L% m$ u/ M9 N) sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; Q# N& Q3 ]1 i4 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 j+ ?9 V" z2 vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: D0 N6 \4 _) F0 b" d9 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 l, L; V  Y3 o% S! c$ h1 k' ZWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 S" c# l) l7 D/ ]; FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# A6 @' M3 i! e5 d! _1 ?+ ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 h5 ^5 L. [3 k( S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& V+ |8 T' v0 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, i% e/ Y# V. [0 o. s$ ^! w# u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) a: o2 G1 X- q; I& G9 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! Q6 E6 b, t2 ~* \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; I" H- `7 t% z- q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% Z& Y3 w# ^" s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: @- s$ M' ?2 Z" J, I: V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" k0 H, W4 e( D4 T4 R6 L<P>你无需担心</P>
( [9 I2 {1 j" x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; h9 g. r& B1 x2 H3 s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  F: {9 l8 l3 r& O1 e2 d! T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% `$ \! ~9 N* Z% |" R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 k( [3 P% b/ D% H: T8 X1 b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. f; b: V. S( v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; `6 J5 F7 i. ~% A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* p7 m6 ]+ Q7 p' ~( H- g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 q( F( _  a* X: o3 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& D8 f, w8 L8 o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& k& e+ {5 i5 _9 ]7 H7 {. [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 _' P" c+ K1 g# Z$ G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 I- t+ d3 g2 W1 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 z, B5 o( X4 r6 d* F, O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ `5 [6 L; G* `% S; e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% f4 ?8 J$ ]( A* F# I  d1 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( ^8 x+ Z; B2 }" T' ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: b; f7 J2 I2 q: z; j# q; K0 F- H我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>