【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- S1 V$ j% d  |5 l; P, @! ^2 j( r/ Q( {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 y4 K) n: f# U% @: TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ b  y# ]7 C" xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( e8 v4 ?9 A- ]! V% @6 LSeeing the sky content with its love
( d; E. ]# W2 f" Q' h) w4 x9 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ r& N6 q6 ?, z! M! QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ x# s: G+ m4 R: G) ~, c: yEvery other word you utter is love
# w) a" ~$ E% YI really want to know just how much you love me
& `9 x# a+ G. W* \. j( rI love you I love you with all my heart
, X" X4 |+ {9 x4 `4 wNothing can compare to my love
2 l5 F* X: {9 W; tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- \( h; g+ L9 ?I want so much to see inside your heart
' @6 g* C& V3 v8 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 [) g  w( y9 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 g. I8 l' E9 R  Q9 x: r( ~# u( VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" ]- x5 C% n2 r( K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" }/ d, Q0 J6 K5 q2 }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# s9 L: x/ b5 a' r' {6 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% t$ q& D2 p$ Q. v3 U; U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- b/ q4 w1 r+ `; _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- Q9 a9 X9 X# \) C& G1 T! D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% U: ^0 j1 \/ h, \: t/ _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% ?, t0 |7 ~% R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* s0 k" w* |6 x& W  C0 E5 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 c  J& O$ z5 j. \& U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& K7 h$ I- m' _, X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 ~8 W6 }9 e: C' c. M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 t& n* N* s: E6 h6 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 Y5 o2 ]$ S! ]  r# a  y+ s8 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 {1 y7 E; o; b; n- ~! D& f5 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; c( z7 D" j( y6 M' Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ R4 o7 {1 C/ g2 B# N2 n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( B( T# a& U4 e! ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ `6 I4 Q1 t. A5 Z9 j$ S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" i  g: a: ]' ^$ u* {% l* ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 ?; o" C  q% q$ V* j, T& n! K( _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& r8 @  w( W- n9 f9 r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" c" x8 t0 g$ k$ b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ {: t! H4 }/ ]4 r4 O9 e8 ~4 O我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>