【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, B1 l! v( ~; E. J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 [9 f6 X( e- n: @! U" n& v1 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) ~. E0 p) W+ Y# y" IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 P- r8 }% D/ V8 X! p" y7 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, I* B9 p" P9 v- p+ a- c! I  fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 D) N. [. N' d" `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' f( X* {0 x7 c  Z, @! a, M# x$ {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, C# {& N0 g* W+ Y4 @) G6 Q: MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 R) u5 ~' {1 z% }" bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  ?: G% C; S; ~! T' u  lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 f# R: _, t) Y9 X( M6 P' R8 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# }/ W  g$ V/ {9 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. }; Y& s- j9 ?8 C$ ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 G! h- _9 R% s2 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 z! Y* p8 q# S( k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! ?/ B9 ]+ }( \: G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 w, x$ _- u, Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! X8 b7 h. \2 b6 T<P>你无需担心</P>
$ X( z8 ]* e( N" a) v' i5 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ T1 O9 m3 |& ]2 J" u  _5 ?  ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# j* P4 y. p3 X0 Z* V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ Q, V' ?4 Q3 x# k9 M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% E! O1 d6 O  P6 ~) E$ e) e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 C1 N4 x( m6 a4 \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 T" ~5 z+ D$ s! P" G2 d& S3 I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 O  I) S: j/ S1 x& J, E& v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. E/ S% m+ P8 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* m+ z6 E# ]. \! q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' n4 m( S2 P! `- b$ w5 j3 n; x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ x) U- S  w4 H4 e, A3 N4 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 A+ Y# M- p7 E5 h% n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ k9 W1 X! @, P7 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" j: K" `3 ?  N# v) z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 v+ g3 w) e7 A& M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 O: u. n3 v  ]) {! P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* k  t# Y0 `6 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ j1 w* n, @  X- Y* ^( i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- \2 p1 D) s& D) L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 \, }# F/ c5 P( n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; r  R5 y( V! n: Q5 W0 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. L$ V$ v  C7 H' u9 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 d( i5 b0 U3 o& ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. N% L3 @9 W# s* _! a* T' p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
' W- E6 K: d$ M5 N- a% A# {5 a
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ^! V2 a( K) [" {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>