【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
9 Q& |, ?3 o  Q, \3 f% qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. O  T" V4 X/ ?1 |/ K# l& a' [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 ^$ R. |  k; V4 b8 c$ @& wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, Y1 k" F" x5 r  h+ H' Y! {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ f- i0 w9 |/ ^, H" u4 ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ n2 Z8 I7 c+ {( I# A5 V- }- FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 S1 k& i9 D1 F1 F+ s( k8 E% mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: l4 F7 O& o7 I  UI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ {5 c0 Y: Z; K4 ^( Z% u' x9 K5 ~0 ?- SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, G/ l7 y5 r* ]8 w# R' wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) n0 }; z$ i+ }- lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; q* ^$ E) ~( w1 u# P3 t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 y9 |5 A1 f( O. S+ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! N7 r& p2 P/ B! |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 r1 X  F4 c8 d% k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 ~, k2 @9 c- l7 i# I2 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( `7 |1 |3 r/ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 j1 G( K) S; `% C0 G<P>你无需担心</P>
* @0 `) q1 ~3 m7 I' X# j7 z- I! i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 C8 F5 y9 L9 u, B/ i# n6 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 L9 J' i, }) ]7 h6 z6 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! Q. p8 {7 ]) P  n; {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) z9 G! S9 g5 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 ?, }; Q% ?! z$ f. V5 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 u& |, R; N/ m% C1 h1 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 t. P) Q# p; p9 C4 m* c. a<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, C, S) g' x9 H9 V5 [- a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ i6 U# B0 d  S1 h5 i3 Z' U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 z, y& y: q0 q3 h1 c( z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; \8 {8 _. j# l8 }# C( d, T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 @) B3 M& S, \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. ^, a8 n  _7 G. c, `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 h, C. s$ R3 G* c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# B! L  i. k/ t% W# x9 f$ g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" @. k' ^6 c6 d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 B* R9 @4 g8 l# Y/ T! C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' u3 U7 Y- {& \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ A1 o" Z4 D3 O. D" u: B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* _& Y& T9 H: G5 P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' L. g( ]$ G/ \: D% h<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& Q! a& K. [; |7 I6 y我请你剖开它
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: ~$ H5 c' ?/ ?# A0 N7 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  h, E% p# Z7 l) z3 B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>