【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* i! I* S# q, J) O# \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% p6 ^5 h+ g# u0 V0 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ q$ f7 S6 U! V( ]8 i( O% QThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ f% O& d/ h9 V0 l0 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 h; ^4 K$ s( u' {, qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. l# b! S* M+ B( S4 L3 ]You needn’t fear anything
5 _  c+ J7 s% m( SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. K7 l% p. n9 _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( \( T' R$ R2 `4 c, ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 i& ]: w$ ?0 T; ]: K% jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% G6 ?9 g. _# E  ~* F) _( Z7 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 P3 f; Y3 o7 C  I, I, T$ VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: l* z& x: @% o' P. M2 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 R& j3 K: k" K6 B# z: hWith such a tongue as yours,
5 F2 @0 J' @" M+ KYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  i7 D8 p0 D. s- v6 h' IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: r- q$ k$ E2 h1 T" ]9 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 ]6 H$ C7 W1 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 H! _1 B/ g4 P) K" B2 l' E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' N, t2 z5 d  ^( g& ^4 _5 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 z: c0 R; B1 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 e4 D; t; H: y" _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 d$ h* m) h  Z& O6 x" ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# u! e5 W$ b8 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ p! h9 b* \9 P3 @2 ?2 T1 p6 Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: j3 @9 S0 x; G5 `<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# R% e) S9 [7 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! G4 v0 p7 E2 w) K' e7 ~. X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Z  W; z3 ~/ A! F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 t: E( @2 t8 ^5 s0 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 j& U' i" s+ k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 F& l0 s1 h! ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 O# I2 W7 p/ \<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ R; b9 r: w! P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( h0 n9 @6 g, L! g* Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 u$ K/ E' h& h9 I1 s& c% I/ e5 }7 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 g7 e; T) @% l7 j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 K) J  Q1 J# q: Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: f1 D1 W! n2 d) V" c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' d* p/ e! ^0 Z, ]  {6 [<P>I regret not dying</P>
) v' m+ S/ C* {3 L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- g: b7 x3 s4 b! d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 A# Q6 S7 S% x% A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 o1 P( R* w7 p; I. L& c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) F: W+ J7 Y: J; j* {- x4 O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# a/ j3 ~. P0 D% ^& v1 R  s6 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>