【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! ]! q+ @9 t3 ]. d  Q2 B/ \- iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 U, |- a) j% |/ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 t# v6 l' e$ q  L4 g1 D" k9 g# XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( Q  S  r8 `  j9 h% iEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 m; I) q( B% f; B$ QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( D' I& d* S; a! Z* n( |" e" G9 TI want so much to see inside your heart
$ {1 s1 U, T% _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ U# T- D, L% `* V; a$ ]( NI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& e5 h, ]% D7 y+ e# UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* r+ p- }* G$ K3 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ Q4 y/ l1 }  N  W; K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 E$ w& }, G* y* B0 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 M% @3 Z  p6 k6 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* l$ _* U( w5 {5 Y3 R8 f" L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  W8 ~- `/ J$ Q6 f' y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: H$ x0 l9 ]- Y" x8 F5 L# G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ Y% q$ R( ]9 s2 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 d" T$ ^5 n$ [6 w* z/ I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ Z0 o0 M+ h7 d/ S, t# m4 w3 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! [9 y( ?# f' d3 U& h/ P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ~& T  K% i/ y$ J* j1 C<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 W' u$ e2 i! @% J/ w. Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) S* Z* Q/ Z3 F) {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( s; Q& T' r2 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 Y$ z1 F, O5 `- z# m8 A: f& W% C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. A6 B$ d  W+ ~+ v4 c) O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& L% d: r* {2 ^6 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* Z/ W/ Y5 q, h' L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ E4 c% \! @2 U9 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 c. w& P* v% U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 o( o- X& h. m; _' R! D. `: E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 ^  c  E: p' b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
: J! K3 o: Q, Q+ y  }/ i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, c9 w. b8 @0 F2 V5 m9 o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& s6 h* i3 V( s- U3 |1 P6 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 `, v0 Z& H1 {* ?- F6 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ z2 P* r8 M+ h% }" w1 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 u* i, a4 h4 w* c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; t/ H0 D  z6 ]2 ]2 M/ }1 y$ |" t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ m* U  M- |2 K& ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 a& n, s9 n  \- @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
; X# v* W- p+ ?6 q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>