【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ l+ v2 {0 V  Z2 \& B2 E- k; F' D. k$ tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 M# N$ |$ h: v" n: L& \7 D( dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. g2 f$ E1 s. {! @# HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- i+ d6 V) @9 P6 pEvery other word you utter is love
8 {3 {2 O4 C" L( G+ aI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 J7 m( v/ u. W, CNothing can compare to my love
4 E/ q) f: ~6 B# S! GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ [  ~% W# ]) n; d" rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' R* {3 y! T# wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- j3 |) ~" [2 h; R: ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, M4 h- |% R& M! _# l; D: {. H; X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) o! c+ l0 |/ P$ f0 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ s% Q7 \: ^0 p! M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ f4 j$ h. O; v7 J8 m& ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ V+ w: M. B. U$ v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  s, k6 L2 I, ^( x5 J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 [0 M" [9 E5 q* X1 |  K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ p  {$ d/ d# p% m$ g' n& u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 \# A, k+ h" {& ^% Y" x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* s( ]3 W8 g  g% G* S* _# w1 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* X  l8 o, s# R4 N4 h8 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* J* o. s; D. O5 V0 d! S" r! _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( K7 k+ H7 S+ [. x% ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* q3 A6 h1 M; g7 E8 J6 q% s* G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 f' y; ^& t9 i0 ~  u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 S  C% y4 m4 B9 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 N1 e9 C7 k) M& a+ {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( Q2 A4 L  ?, d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 t" P& c7 ]+ W1 N& L$ \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 `  t! U, x1 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ u- a# ~' X# G9 Q+ G: t  |% \0 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' V1 v5 M. z$ O. c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& M" ^. A) y: B; ?% Z: M7 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ O* B: v% U! M7 ]5 o1 \, w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: }* o+ b+ W, h5 Q% U( V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& N9 e1 Y9 z* X9 g8 |1 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, P, {' K! c3 J: r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 ^, `( [) V- ?2 A, E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& G" ?8 I2 O8 \0 ^8 K$ T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) ?) j: D$ Y8 @' k2 ?5 o4 S& I- P- k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>