【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

/ H. o, B1 R4 U7 [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 C7 b9 e: P/ ^$ f6 R4 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

# K: y( C% {$ G% G' s1 f! ]6 A6 r我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  
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3 E  J. d, {1 DFrom the first moment we met,
) h3 G; V. Q8 N9 AI already loved you with all my heart

7 D( r4 p9 m! y7 M) O% b在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
5 {4 p" k2 Q6 h6 g我的心

3 O7 A- r; ~3 I! O/ {  s/ d0 OWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

; a( u4 c" S5 `0 }" Y- G, j縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! R& ?0 R1 g1 q4 V: Z% fI would probably know how you feel
7 @" R8 x1 @4 K$ T* \凝視著你的眼
7 E! K% M- u/ u/ _% [搜尋著你的魂
" X- o5 p) {3 P% I- D; y5 T我也許就能了解
8 @" ?2 l* x" w0 Q. E5 G! M你的心情
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/ O1 B; n/ a" @  \6 |" pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

% A/ m5 E$ p8 v! a; x3 V愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
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  y+ k% C6 f9 ^3 U7 eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
( y; O! N& S. W+ W% n" v卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 C, B; C) u, Y. X* f% x7 T也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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7 N4 e% W( Q' H9 H; w, ^If today isn’t too late,
; F: w1 C3 r! y8 ~7 p3 s3 dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

/ x6 E* V* d% L% GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
4 ^. Q1 H% I" {5 L+ U收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
: d- Z3 [2 d9 t7 T  g; x6 U7 hWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
! `# @; N( P3 D; R" ^為什麼如此難以表白?
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) c% O$ ]* p0 I, H- xI want to confess that I love you,
6 B# ?& Q1 r& a1 j6 D8 wBut I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
" ^6 _$ W3 ~) `  ?卻還是說不出來
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! ?* A2 D: I, J: b2 W( ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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7 n5 }* T( N& D9 Q1 sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ?+ |, A1 o  W# B+ U; v4 Q7 M
希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
$ Z  {' f0 ^" [$ H: \我心底的秘密

1 B) Q6 M1 E, ?0 o: e- U# u# V$ gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

; s5 |2 d" {$ F( C; q3 }6 S3 t' v不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

0 e  m% G' w5 t) J( OCan I entrust it to you?
/ K" }5 e6 t: x; c7 W& REntrust my love within your heart

/ x3 r. a7 p8 W# H可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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* g. y4 r/ j# S! SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 X& _" c6 Y# }5 B; S
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' J! v& y8 [# w& ?  c: S
1 B% w! I4 @9 K皎潔月光下
  k- C" t+ ?4 @& v7 n天空金銀閃爍
3 F  Y+ c7 H. u- v3 A0 r凝視著星空
  }9 O4 X; U" m我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! h4 ]" I1 ?/ h7 a9 @5 |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
) \, {9 T  o6 m% A- ]8 Y月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
$ s6 l6 u# f" P- c1 J星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

6 c0 w9 P$ w6 J1 l我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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, a) Q" `) q  D8 z; J2 X! d, sYou needn’t fear anything
  X" `: i0 s, t- i- f  A; UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

- o- f( \" ~0 y8 x  u0 G你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
* h& ~* ?5 }" L( \/ e9 n你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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- ~$ B7 l1 v4 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

/ ~* [2 [# u. k/ l, l我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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1 W$ M& G9 t5 g0 `3 l( }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
/ g- J2 r3 [3 ~" r" v你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

' [1 f; R  a+ s+ ?' pI regret not dying
. n/ U! [! \3 U" e# k+ P4 YI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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! B' R; u2 u9 c6 a3 a  a4 F! n可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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6 m/ b- X# l  e) y% E0 v5 q7 kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 R1 I; W2 v; v6 y6 `8 {- j$ f
- L6 H: q8 I/ p# q( B) [* \! G這樣一張巧舌
; N- q. }* \. Q2 S你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& S# p: L0 a. r如果我真有千百張口
* p1 l2 N6 v* M$ r" \( r; m我將對你訴說
3 I  U7 b3 h1 [6 [# H2 X# V千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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' r& E, @% t0 r  I4 t8 `訴說千萬個
9 f; P9 D2 S5 }& y$ T愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒